Today in writing, we talked about adding details to sentences to make our writing more exciting! I gave the kiddos a boring sentence and they had to add details to make it more exciting!
Check out our star writing students that came up with some great sentences today!!
Boring sentence: I got new shoes.
Sentences with details:
I got gray shoes for Christmas. -By Logan
I went to the mall and got brand new black Nike shoes. -By Taylor
Boring sentence: I play at recess.
Sentences with details:
I play hide-and-seek out at recess. -By Angelica
Boring sentence: My cat eats.
Sentences with detail:
My three cats eat liver and chicken. -By Jessica
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