Wednesday, January 2, 2013

SUPER DUPER SENTENCE WRITERS!!!

Today in writing, we talked about adding details to sentences to make our writing more exciting!  I gave the kiddos a boring sentence and they had to add details to make it more exciting!

Check out our star writing students that came up with some great sentences today!!

Boring sentence:  I got new shoes.
Sentences with details:
I got gray shoes for Christmas.  -By Logan
I went to the mall and got brand new black Nike shoes.  -By Taylor

Boring sentence: I play at recess.
Sentences with details:
I play hide-and-seek out at recess.  -By Angelica

Boring sentence: My cat eats.
Sentences with detail:
My three cats eat liver and chicken. -By Jessica

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